xAvodinhx said: "plot and panels are retarded and don't make sense grammar makes it unable to understand if all the grammar was correct and the panels made more sense and you showed which was flashback and which wasn't I think it'd be a LOT better" Flame first comic you see on basil because you're pissed so you decide to take it out on someone else. Check. There's nothing wrong with the grammar... and someone with common sense could easily make out a plot. On-topic: Nice comic. I've been on the

xAvodinhx said: "plot and panels are retarded and don't make sense grammar makes it unable to understand if all the grammar was correct and the panels made more sense and you showed which was flashback and which wasn't I think it'd be a LOT better" Please tell me what I did wrong with my grammar.

:O I feel sorry for Sandra! Let's all have a moment of silence

plot and panels are retarded and don't make sense grammar makes it unable to understand if all the grammar was correct and the panels made more sense and you showed which was flashback and which wasn't I think it'd be a LOT better

Goes too quickly. The chat boxes are REALLY uninteresting. The characters have no personality, no character, no dynamics. Not to mention a lot of the grammar is wrong. I also don't get the 5th panel, where it says "Clang Clang" and everything is blur.

oh ok then the gunslinger is lissa and the the girl in rags with guy hair(0.0) is sandra in the future its 2 bad heckguy in the future they don't have grass skirts :D

I think Sandra (Sandy) is the person with the black eye its just that she cut her hair. And the guy with the hood on is the guy that Sandra was talking to in the beginning. Lissa is the pirate girl and Terrence is the king? and the "clang" "clang" part was a flashback to the beginning. Correct me if im wrong

thisxguyx said: "I think you should have shown Sandra's regular eyes in the flashback panels so it was more clear that the girl was Sandra in the later ones." He does, when she's walking away.

-gasp- Some one in a grass skirt? I'm not the only one.

I THINK it's cool....

I think you should have shown Sandra's regular eyes in the flashback panels so it was more clear that the girl was Sandra in the later ones.

can't we all just get along? ):

duderok said: "Why does the beat up guy have girl eyes?" I think the beat-up girl is Sandra in the future. They have the same eyes.

kogarfire22 said: " i think its a girl he said lissa isn't that a girl's name? -goes to google and searchs-" I thought Lissa was the pirate girl.

Work on your grammar :P