French & English FTW x] and Chinese, Korean + Japanese...........>:O

make more comics with shorter words...or write a book maybe? i liked it...but this is beyond the level of most

mygeto4 said: "What the hell does the name of the comic mean?" The black sky and me Chapiter 1 : The wrath and the ruins

What the hell does the name of the comic mean?

SiegHart19 said: "2 many words......" Not enough words

I like the comics BUT The style that it is written in is hard to follow Ex: Picture and the text scrunched together don't work well for me

Centenial said: "Wow, VERY nice. This is one of the most creative stories I've seen in Basil Market. It's so creative, I must click the "I like this" button. However, a comic doesn't do well with an overload of pictures. You have talent in writing, you should write this in a novel. :]" I agree. I'd prefer this to be a written story, rather than a comic. I just get confused. xD

The characters look a bit stretched, might I suggest playing on bannedstory a bit more so it seems to be in maximized alignment with the original character?

Sebisher said: " He needs to improve his grammar though." They're all dialogue. Dialogue does not need correct grammar.

Very nice. Just remember, "Even though he got away, we managed to get his money," is different from "thanks to our tough friend Billy, over there." But, yes. Just, before you type everything up and submit it, run a spell check. Better it be delayed a few hours than have grammatical errors and stuff. Either way, I can't wait to see what happens next. :O

Try shrinking the dialogue.

2 many words......

Its a bit confusing. Dx

Sebisher said: " He needs to improve his grammar though." Before a novel is published, it goes through a series of revision and proof-read from another person other than the author him or herself.

Centenial said: "Wow, VERY nice. This is one of the most creative stories I've seen in Basil Market. It's so creative, I must click the "I like this" button. However, a comic doesn't do well with an overload of pictures. You have talent in writing, you should write this in a novel. :]" He needs to improve his grammar though.