It's the arms. They're to short. The head looks slightly...thin too. But heads CAN be like that. The arms are kind of disproportionate.

vanilla said: " I'm starting to think it's the head." I think it's his right arm xD It might look better if it were a bit bent, with the gun aiming higher. Is the right hand's thumb supposed to be in that position? Usually I see people wrapping their thumbs around the handle, but that's just me xD

Do you draw with crayons? Cause it sure gives a blasting good effect! :D And about your previous post....Yep it's the head

When I started staring at this, the head was like moving front to back and vice versa. xDD

i wUb j0o bAnIwaa ><

Once I saw this picture, I thought this: "Hold still, I'm going to shoot you and kill you." O_O

vanilla said: " I'm starting to think it's the head." its not the head, the head is fine porportion wise, i like the expression :O the left arm need to be longer cuz the shoulder is suppose to be showing in this pose :3

r3never said: "it doesnt feel right some how..." I'm starting to think it's the head.

FearOfDucks said: "vanilla this is amazing i was just wondering what type of pencials u use cause i love the darkness and also i love animal crossing too :D XD EDIT: forgot to mention whats with u and drawing those hanging belts and the fingerless gloves? xD i love ur style! :D" Let's just say.. Zelda.

*tickles chin* teehee

vanilla this is amazing i was just wondering what type of pencials u use cause i love the darkness and also i love animal crossing too :D XD EDIT: forgot to mention whats with u and drawing those hanging belts and the fingerless gloves? xD i love ur style! :D

something about this doesn't look right. the pose could have been better, i guess.

vanilla said: " Each time I look at this, I keep thinking it could've been a little better..." i have to admit, you could have.

vanilla said: " Each time I look at this, I keep thinking it could've been a little better..." It happens to all artists, they don't think there work is as good as everyone else does... its because you look at it so long you can find the tiny detail that nobody else notices

vanilla said: " Each time I look at this, I keep thinking it could've been a little better..." If you push yourself to hard, you may snap. Just relax a bit, you succeeded in making a great drawing.