So do most of you dislike this comic because it looks like something you have seen before?

Lmao, two guns then one gun. o__O

Watch the white-haired dude get hit by a train.

Centenial said: " You have good comic making skills, but your creativity is generally low." oh ok i need to think of a story thats more original ill make another part to see what people say but if it isnt good then ill think of another

SingledOut16 said: "The guns change from panel to panel..." ur right and he alos loses one...

lilblizz said: " how the hell does this remind you of Naruto? who is crandlemeade?" You have good comic making skills, but your creativity is generally low.

a little more cliched than the other one, it wouldn't kill you to show a bit more expressive faces, and sorta corny dialogue. o.0 Dialogues should sound just like how you talk to your friends, casualish, otherwise they sound corny o.0

The guns change from panel to panel...

Could be much better if they had emotions. Other than that, pretty good.

When did the other dude lose a gun? o.o

Centenial said: "What is this, modern version of Naruto?" how the hell does this remind you of Naruto? who is crandlemeade?

you're turning into crandlemeade or whatever.

What is this, modern version of Naruto?

VietPlayer said: "omg some1 took his other gun" its in his pants :p

its not bad...