Iris prologue end

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xKairuko 11/10/08

alick12345 said: "why did he told me?" Why he told me*

alick12345 11/09/08

why did he told me?

Kois345 11/09/08

lol. in the last panel notice how the guy with the red hair looks "down".

Noob4ever 11/09/08

If purple eyes can be powerful, what do white eyes do?

secsuey 11/09/08

he is a soul eater? link

l3lader 11/09/08

lamRight said: " But then the person saying them sounds stupid as hell: Why he told me to come here. Say that out loud and edit your comment. *Edit- Don't edit your comment didn't see that "Don't think the maker intended for that" my bad." true.

Centenial 11/09/08

xVedris said: "[quote]And only because I'm odd, he wants to kill me? roflcopter." WIN. :]

xVedris 11/09/08

And only because I'm odd, he wants to kill me?

itskrazy 11/09/08

Im impressed. Keep it up

lamRight

Centenial said: " Grammar errors don't necessarily mean that the writer's grammar is bad. If you noticed, all the words are in chat boxes. Meaning they are said by the characters. Characters don't have to speak in perfect grammar. They can speak however they want, which adds some details to the story. Although I highly doubt the maker was doing this, it's plausible. On Topic: Well done. You have the story and the conflict going. You ended the chapter well with the fight scene. What I dislike is

Centenial 11/09/08

Sebisher said: "Dam...the grammar errors...." Grammar errors don't necessarily mean that the writer's grammar is bad. If you noticed, all the words are in chat boxes. Meaning they are said by the characters. Characters don't have to speak in perfect grammar. They can speak however they want, which adds some details to the story. Although I highly doubt the maker was doing this, it's plausible. On Topic: Well done. You have the story and the conflict going. You ended the chapter well with the fig

XtremGamer 11/09/08

Very good comic, but the "eats souls" in the bottom of the third panel looks smaller than everything else. I guess you did that to fit it. I can't wait till the next comic!

HEATHURR 11/09/08

Improve on the grammar, it really takes away from the comic. Other than that, I really like it. I can't wait to see where it goes. :3

Sebisher 11/09/08

Dam...the grammar errors....

dragonfly973 11/09/08

Seems pretty intersting thus far... I like how the pictures and text are clean and non-blurry