Chaud said: " agreed. not half bad tho. Wow, i can't believe i'm about to tell you this, but looking at this, i need to: comics are still works of literature. literature, at least a majority of it, needs a storyline, a plot (poems are an example of what do not need that). this kind of comic, an extensive adventure or just multiple adventures, usually needs at least some storyline to hold it together. or at least in my own opinion (maybe not yours, since comics can also be written purely for come

it felt like it was slowing down but its going back to a good pace

FrostKun said: "This almost feels like a tv series now. Just an adventure after another. :/" Kinda like Pokemon? =O It was okay, I guess. The usual criticism: good, but not much happened. At this rate, it'll take a billion and five issues to finish this series! =O

Only an IDIOT would flame this comic, its so awesome =)

themags said: "Generally, try to avoid walls of text unless you have to or it's for dramatic/comedic effect. People like comics because of the artwork and the scenes happening in the story. One of the projects I've been meaning to do involve minimal or no dialogue at all. It's up to the audience to interpret the story. It's like when you watch old Tom and Jerry cartoons. You fully understand what is happening on screen and the characters don't utter a single word besides voicing out their emotio

Lol the Cleric said "Duties" :3. Great Series

FrostKun said: "This almost feels like a tv series now. Just an adventure after another. :/" agreed. not half bad tho. themags said: "Generally, try to avoid walls of text unless you have to or it's for dramatic/comedic effect. People like comics because of the artwork and the scenes happening in the story. One of the projects I've been meaning to do involve minimal or no dialogue at all. It's up to the audience to interpret the story. It's like when you watch old Tom and Jerry cartoons. You ful

This almost feels like a tv series now. Just an adventure after another. :/

Oh noes! Falling door. D: And taken from Eto's questions, I'd actually like it better if you made a flashback of the guy talking instead of the falling door. :O

I probably could have done it with flashbacks like the last comic... but I was really tired when I made this XP Oh well... last large wall of text for a while anyways.

Generally, try to avoid walls of text unless you have to or it's for dramatic/comedic effect. People like comics because of the artwork and the scenes happening in the story. One of the projects I've been meaning to do involve minimal or no dialogue at all. It's up to the audience to interpret the story. It's like when you watch old Tom and Jerry cartoons. You fully understand what is happening on screen and the characters don't utter a single word besides voicing out their emotions (yelling in

L0NEHAWK said: " large dialogues help progress a story and since he isnt given much space he has to mash it all together making it seem large. but the story is fantastic i hope there will be a lot of arcs to come. ^_^" But showing what goes on using actions is more entertaining.

L0NEHAWK said: "large dialogues help progress a story and since he isnt given much space he has to mash it all together making it seem large." I guess that's true, but he does have plenty of room in that panel (plus he could extend the comic's height too). He even has ~78kb to work with if he wanted to keep the quality up. But I'll wait for his answer. I'm sure it'll make more sense than all of us guessing.

Etokapa said: "Good job. I am curious to know one thing though. Why do you prefer large dialogues instead of illustrating them in the comic? Granted, it is easier, but is there a specific reason?" large dialogues help progress a story and since he isnt given much space he has to mash it all together making it seem large. but the story is fantastic i hope there will be a lot of arcs to come. ^_^

Etokapa said: "Good job. I am curious to know one thing though. Why do you prefer large dialogues instead of illustrating them in the comic? Granted, it is easier, but is there a specific reason?" It separates men from mice