That chick has guy hair.

I didn't notice this. Although your title may be original, it seems as if you put no creativity whatsoever in creating the name "Skybow."

Skybow is such a realistic name.

is that the allspark?

porkky said: "Aww.. why do comic makers have to pick on archers... " Hypocrite!

This one's a bit better than your other ones. When you do the motion thing, make sure you finish off by pasting the original image of the character at the end. That way, you see the motion thing and the character is still visible. Btw, you do know that you can flip the little pointy part of the chat bubble, right? Just use the square selection tool thing in BannedStory and click on the pointy part. It should flip it. It's not that bad, though. Good job

Goliath797 said: " Thank you for adding more unique critique this time around. By the way crandelmeade, you're my hero. Please teach me how to be like you. :D" As I have said before, unique comics deserve unique critique.

Centenial said: "1] Things happened quite suddenly. That guy announces that they're being attacked, and a purple light suddenly kills him. A good thing you should have done was to make it slower and dramatic. Make the killing slow, and put drama and maybe even some action in to it. That puts some gist in to a comic. I know it may sound cynical ("Make the killing slow") but it will make it better. 2] Same old story. Father protects son, evil people want him dead, father probably dies protecting h

This isn't overdone. No, not at all. The story of the dad and the son training and then the son leaving while the dad goes to die in a crisis that magically happens because of the son, so the son has to go and avenge his father is totally original and well thought-out.

kyothekitty said: "Boss says stop making comics. Boss thinks they suck." LMAO i didnt think it sucked but HAHA "boss thinks.." lol

Boss says stop making comics. Boss thinks they suck.

nice comic i was vote 19!

9991111334 said: " You too sir..." I was quoting the comic, you see? :O

1] Things happened quite suddenly. That guy announces that they're being attacked, and a purple light suddenly kills him. A good thing you should have done was to make it slower and dramatic. Make the killing slow, and put drama and maybe even some action in to it. That puts some gist in to a comic. I know it may sound cynical ("Make the killing slow") but it will make it better. 2] Same old story. Father protects son, evil people want him dead, father probably dies protecting his son. To put or

Pandivious said: ""Maybe it's about time I my advanced techniques." Read your comic before you submit it, and you won't make minor mistakes. " You too sir...