hard to read.

Dude, Shouldn't a mystery NOT REVEAL THE KILLER? If one of those guys in the last panel aren't the killers, then try to make it more suspenseful and not show them, please.

Nooo only I can knock Joel out!

DoctorClyde said: ""At a u nknown location"?" At an unknown

Not bad. Kind of a hard concept tho. But isn't companion cube from Portal? And it's at an unknown location, just saying. :P

Weighted Companion Cube

xVedris said: "My eyes! They bur--hurt? e_e The text is so difficult to read in the first few panels. White + Black on Black and White? Not a good combination. More contrast please. i.e. more shades of grey for the text I didn't notice the cellphone until I looked at the comments. xD Ivan... winking...? :o And why is the guy's words red? Work on your text. It's either really hard to read or totally different from the standard that you've set in the beginning and past issue. Annnnnd work on your

My eyes! They bur--hurt? e_e The text is so difficult to read in the first few panels. White + Black on Black and White? Not a good combination. More contrast please. i.e. more shades of grey for the text I didn't notice the cellphone until I looked at the comments. xD Ivan... winking...? :o And why is the guy's words red? Work on your text. It's either really hard to read or totally different from the standard that you've set in the beginning and past issue. Annnnnd work on your spelling and gr

2nd to last panel "Successufly" I broke it down and got Succes! you fly!

AnasF said: "Jay, how could you? it may be that you dumbed down your grammar for Basil, but.. there are two errors: "Should've" instead of "Should of." and.. "At an unknown location" instead of "At a unknown location." I guess you were just tired, and blundered? :P" Heya Anas. I'm real... dumb when it comes to proof reading my crap. Also I was sick in bed all day, it would help if I wasn't half asleep as I made this.

AnasF said: "Jay, how could you? it may be that you dumbed down your grammar for Basil, but.. there are two errors: "Should've" instead of "Should of." and.. "At an unknown location" instead of "At a unknown location." I guess you were just tired, and blundered? :P" We don't care :<

So very interesting ... comics?, graphic writing?, sketched in the beginning?, amazing how many colors black and white have within themselves!, ~wonders how you would have created the Effect of Red in black & white, ~ wonders why I personally, an avid reader, have trouble following a story in panels.. it's really neat

Jay, how could you? it may be that you dumbed down your grammar for Basil, but.. there are two errors: "Should've" instead of "Should of." and.. "At an unknown location" instead of "At a unknown location." I guess you were just tired, and blundered? :P

"No, the best evidence comes from e-mails." LOL

lanstrange said: "I liked it, expect the throwing star looked kinda funny?" That's a weighted companion cube. ...The killer version, according to the comic. D: