i dont see how it was confusing o.o MaxxDK said: "Er... what? Also, that F5 looks like a child whining for something." I guess you could say he's crying and whining about being a noob? DartzDragon said: "I Like da lil nooby singing " MR NOOBY" xP" lol yeah i really enjoy making him :D its for extra kicks lawl

Er... what? Also, that F5 looks like a child whining for something.

I Like da lil nooby singing " MR NOOBY" xP

weedow2 said: "aww i cant c it cuz im my psp " Do you have a computer?

That was seriously confusing, man. o_o But the fail made me laugh x]

Kois345 said: "...lolwut?" Dunno?

Oh great!Continue.Your stories are getting really good now.

The humor was really dry... and picture quality matters A LOT when you're making a COMIC. If this was compiled into a book, it would be called a GRAPHIC novel. It's supposed to be visually pleasing, not bland colors and a wall of text. Also, as it is a COMIC, spacing is very important. Squeezing in as many panels as possible makes it look like crap.

The main/side character thing made me lol I guess

femaleaznsin said: " sorry, get on a computer maybe then read it? D: " LOL, seriously?

weedow2 said: "aww i cant c it cuz im my psp " sorry, get on a computer maybe then read it? D: xEnnCeee said: "Nuuu! Don't die duke >:o" ill release the next part faster so you can see what happens :D

...lolwut?

Nuuu! Don't die duke >:o

aww i cant c it cuz im my psp

AssassinDude said: "Ummmm no plot at all? Specifiy on plot and bubbles... and dont start the first panesl like that, that brings out the basil flamers O.o" so like no plot at all? please feel free to go back and check from 1 to right now if you missed it but it actually has a plot, it just contains many many jokes. And dont start the first panel like that? brings out flames? Um okay thanks for the advice but please understand it is a *** reference o.o hobobob said: "Kk so? There is a limit to wh