almost every comment is about spelling and grammar lol hey at least you can read it...right? >.>

wow man worst grammatic times that i have ever seen

Centenial said: " On the other note, your grammar ' s so horrible that it ' s funny for some odd reason... You're the one to talk." correct prose can count as correct grammar

Lern2English please.

halacrazy said: " lol me too" same lmfao

Lol at the grammar. At least it's clean and simple, that's good.

Like the story, a lot. Just fix the spelling/grammar.

give him a break guys . not everyone has a good grammar

yea its really well done but grammer is dumb 1st frame: i do not HAVE a gun 2nd frame: good 3rd frame: the first (of the?) living dead... (still sounds a bit off, i know, it just originally sounded singular or something) 4th: however, he himself BECAME (one of the) living dead, after the first (of the) living dead WAS born. edit: if you wanna stick with the whole "first living dead" idea rather than adding the (of the) maybe refer to them as zombies :O "after the first zombie was born" "after th

JUST FOR YOUR INFO... He create the storyline THE BLIND LOVE for me... lol

It's not bad, but the "I do not had a gun" make me lol. But seriously, this has originality.

m-i-c-k-e-y~

High expectations per se, but lets also keep the grammar up high and fluent, to awe the crowd :D

"i do not had a gun" but u do had a fail reminds me of resident evil

IF the grammar was better I would like it a bit more, it looks nice, and it's not that cliche for people that think it is