Tatufiuz said: "That's not a good way to solve teenage pregnancy.." QFTW

That's not a good way to solve teenage pregnancy..

DrakeAres said: "that is one uglyass baby" its a monkey

Plz let the main character die in the last episode? plz?

The only thing I noticed right now was the proportions of the characters are off a bit (e.g. too wide, too thin, etc). However, I DO realize that keeping the proportions the same when resizing is difficult if you're using (as far as I know) anything but Photoshop. Other than that, seems interesting (and although it has potential, don't let it slip. ).

Make it less cliche'd. Chosen one and all that stuff is really disgusting, and kills the comic. Make the plot more interesting. The storyline seems okay though. It was a good start. Work on it and continue. :D And watch the resizing. The head size is different every time.

Good job on originality! Except for one thing, if you make him grow up, and then have him have some uber-omg-what-hax powers, and he is put in a life-death situation, and his powers unlock, that's the most cliche thing ever, so try to avoid that lol. Yeah, you could at least try to resize it in bannedstory to make a more realistic baby. And not many people hold their babies dangling by their arms o.o

that is one uglyass baby

Every single panel looks resized and blurred.

I can see the next episode afther "is that a baby" he say "hell no it is too big for by a baby" well a tip left some space between the pic and put a black background it make the lecture easier

I bet birth was BRUTAL for her.

i like it already has potential, be sure to watch out for grammar in the future i hate comics where characters cant speak properly

l3lader said: "I'm afraid your baby is a giant, or the characters are just midgets." Lol, yes. The baby is at least half the size of the characters XD

Ugglo said: "Not the best editing skills ever, but the story seems really interesting :O! And it's very original too! Keep going! I want to see what happens with the baby angel :B" Thanks . I'm trying to make the story as interesting and original as possible, and hopefully my editing skills will improve.

Not the best editing skills ever, but the story seems really interesting :O! And it's very original too! Keep going! I want to see what happens with the baby angel :B