lol @ panel 2. glitched text bubble xD

I actually want to see the next parts of this.

I bet I know what happens, he follows the chick who got made fun of and becomes her smex toy.

She is tough, no funny faces...

If you saw errors already then fix them..

Hey a couple things i see wrong. When you get unlucky enough to the point where text is out of order (Not top to bottom, left to right) Try making 2 separate panels. Otherwise, people read text ahead of time that they weren't supposed to. And sometimes it becomes a huge problem. Don't try to avoid this by numbering the bubbles, it still doesnt work. You could also at least give the new girl some expressions o.o;; Another thing, try to cut down on the empty space on the sides, makes it look messy

Lol,i think the "girlfriend's" shirt is more hideous...

I dont like it. First of all, i dont really see any storyline so far. Always check the comic before you submit, because of the arrows and the missing word. And IMO the Maple F5 shouldnt be used to actually show anger, it's more of a funny anger, which is not what you are aiming for.

i liked it but try to not leave so much black space ;)

Or poor girl. :3

.. What a terrible boyfriend. Seriously speaking.

Oh no! Suddenly, a two-faced guy!

Where did you get the 3rd chat bubble? At the hilarious slip-up store?

I dont get it

If you knew there were mistakes, couldn't you at least fix them before you sent it in? ._. Not sure about how I like the plot, but it's wayy to early to judge. xD You need a better/flashier title. :o CoolText.com has some good styles if you don't want to make your own.