Lyov said: "There is way to many crappy comics on basil.. Here is the plot for them all; Some random kid who means nothing to anyone is hating his life All of a sudden people come and attack him or he finds a special item Rest of the comic is done with crappy fight scenes, stupid outfits, bad english Rarely a comic will actually finish, most of the time people just stop making them 'cos they realise they suck. I'd say PandasCreed or whatever it is, is the best comic to be put on Basil so far. Th

There is way to many crappy comics on basil.. Here is the plot for them all; Some random kid who means nothing to anyone is hating his life All of a sudden people come and attack him or he finds a special item Rest of the comic is done with crappy fight scenes, stupid outfits, bad english Rarely a comic will actually finish, most of the time people just stop making them 'cos they realise they suck. I'd say PandasCreed or whatever it is, is the best comic to be put on Basil so far. There have bee

Did you base it on the movie or the book? the movie was terrible, but the book was brilliant. (read the trilogy) =] Good effort.. but perhaps you should a more interesting scene/section next time, like the bit where Paul uses the voice to free him and his mother on the thopter and steer it threw a storm. =]

Yos2 said: "All comics with that character dressed in all black with a black hood are instant fail." Took the words right out of my mouth.

All comics with that character dressed in all black with a black hood are instant fail.

heckguy said: " No. Not again. " Lmao Hecky. I feel ya, man. On Topic: I don't think it was really necessary to put "We'll talk later the kid is listening". I mean, no one really talks like that. Not too bad, though. Just make the size a little bigger. You almost broke my eyes ;~;

Don't use Comic Life for Maplestory Comics @_@

Stars0fchaos said: "If you can't see it, and you claim it in your comment, you're stating the fact you need glasses. I can read it just fine." Maybe your vision is a lot better than an average person? EDIT : I can read it just fine if I focus. I don't have to on most of the other comics on Basil.

If you can't see it, and you claim it in your comment, you're stating the fact you need glasses. I can read it just fine.

It's really small.

maybeupthere said: " It's a classic science fiction book. It's actually really excellent, and not nearly as cliche as you'd think." It's so awesome that Half-Life made a refrence or two to it

Solafo said: "this style of comics is really getting old the style of inhuman,destiny,etc." It's a classic science fiction book. It's actually really excellent, and not nearly as cliche as you'd think.

Hm....here's a few things that I think would make it better. A good rule of thumb to follow is to pretend you're the reader, even if you are the maker. Because to have a successful comic, the reader has to like it. =) For example, if you're looking it over and you find that it's hard to see the facial expressions, chances are the reader will have a hard time too. From a reader's perspective, I would say the comic is hard to "read". The font and font size you're using is fine, but what I mean is

the spice!

I loved Dune... But I think you need the panels to be larger and the gom jabbar part to be more detailed x.x; First you see her holding the box then hold a dagger? But Paul's not even close to her?