By the way, might I mention the editting is like 10x better than it used to be? I barely recognized it.

cool. the name shiro is overused though lol.

Macaroni said: "Now this is a story! I like this one because not only are the editing skills great, but the dialogue isn't cliche and boring, and the story... the story is just awesome. I'm going to go read the rest of them now. Keep it up! EDIT: The only thing I would change is giving each panel a bit of space (black space is fine) between them - that way it's a bit easier to distinguish each panel. GREAT JOB! " *agrees*

Now this is a story! I like this one because not only are the editing skills great, but the dialogue isn't cliche and boring, and the story... the story is just awesome. I'm going to go read the rest of them now. Keep it up! EDIT: The only thing I would change is giving each panel a bit of space (black space is fine) between them - that way it's a bit easier to distinguish each panel. GREAT JOB!

Lonewolf78 said: "I love how all the names are Japanese/totali azn. ... Hooray for sarcasm." LOL you mispelled totally and asian. ._.

Oooh, looks good.

Woah, nice series xP

this is missing something.... BANKAI!

Lonewolf78 said: "I love how all the names are Japanese/totali azn. ... Hooray for sarcasm." I love how you abbreviated a 5 letter word. ... Hooray for sarcasm.

Sheikox said: "i like how you did the flames. Could u please share ur secrets " You use the original flaming katana weapon, and then you change the hue/contrast/etc of it :D

omg, looks so awesome, u must have worked really hard =P

You worked hard, I can tell. Great editing. And I have to admit, the storyline is great. Plot is perfect. Fighting among evil/good brothers doesn't sound that original, but you don't often read/watch anything with such plot. Just don't cliche' it up with the bro freeing his soul and all that crap. Use your imagination and put liveliness, suspense, and excitement in to this story. And nice use of characterization too. First comic, and you can already infer how the characters will act/think. Good

I love how all the names are Japanese/totali azn. ... Hooray for sarcasm.

Reoss said: "is the title "inspired" by the book dealing with dragons -_-" It is, actually. Great book that ("inspired," I suppose) my fifth and sixth grade years. Congrats on being the first person to notice that xD Sheikox said: "i like how you did the flames. Could u please share ur secrets " Thank you, haha. It's a weapon in Bannedstory actually, go to weapons -> other, then look in the third tab. TCRacer said: "Way different then your old ones, but still amazing. This was my favorite of the

Wow, that was actually pretty good. o.o One of the few comics on Basil that seem worth reading.