Betrayal- 1
Submitted by HaruTsukiko
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Comments (15)
Fynl 10/13/08
Good idea, but I have some, I dunno, suggestions to make it a little (in my opinion) better/unique. -The name of the king killed the story. It woulda been an epic beginning, but it just turned the comic into a joke almost. -I've seen some people (no idea how) change up the animations of the characters in ways that isn't possible in MS. Maybe if you did that in some scenes, like at the end, have his arms up trying to protect him or fend off the wolf or something. Just something different than Fac
l3lader 10/13/08
Centenial said: "Honestly, it annoys me when people say "Flames will be ignored." Constructive criticism is cool and all, but it doesn't help. It's basically a nice way of insulting someone. Just say it straight out. Negative criticisms help more than positive ones. If you're going to ignore them, you won't improve. 1] Comic is too short. That means no story. That means boring. 2] No plot. No storyline. OMG, a giant wolf ate him. The end. BORING. 3] Cliche'd personality. The secretive, betraying
Reoss 10/12/08
probably the first comic in basil with- A SNOWY BACKGROUND
msseller 10/12/08
I actually like it. Keep going buddy! :D
superdogsy 10/12/08
Centenial said: "Honestly, it annoys me when people say "Flames will be ignored." Constructive criticism is cool and all, but it doesn't help. It's basically a nice way of insulting someone. Just say it straight out. Negative criticisms help more than positive ones. If you're going to ignore them, you won't improve. 1] Comic is too short. That means no story. That means boring. 2] No plot. No storyline. OMG, a giant wolf ate him. The end. BORING. 3] Cliche'd personality. The secretive, betraying
Centenial 10/12/08Honestly, it annoys me when people say "Flames will be ignored." Constructive criticism is cool and all, but it doesn't help. It's basically a nice way of insulting someone. Just say it straight out. Negative criticisms help more than positive ones. If you're going to ignore them, you won't improve. 1] Comic is too short. That means no story. That means boring. 2] No plot. No storyline. OMG, a giant wolf ate him. The end. BORING. 3] Cliche'd personality. The secretive, betraying, mysterious, per
l3lader 10/12/08
Pandivious said: "If my king's name was xxNaruto1337sin I'd kill him too. :X" He'll send his cat to kill you. link
DeathPsycho 10/12/08The beginning panels were confusing. Generally, the chat bubbles that are said first are higher than things said last
hobobob 10/12/08
Grand Vizer. Lol, he's a human hat? (yes, vizer=/=visor)
CBXtreme 10/12/08
Pandivious said: "If my king's name was xxNaruto1337sin I'd kill him too. :X"
HateSpirit 10/12/08
he's not even a sin lol he's a mage
nivlek321 10/12/08
Pandivious said: "If my king's name was xxNaruto1337sin I'd kill him too. :X" His name is so pimp
Kyuthemc 10/12/08
Pandivious said: "If my king's name was xxNaruto1337sin I'd kill him too. :X" LOL. QFT.
Aznpkerboy 10/12/08It's obnoxiously funny how the king doesn't move a bit.
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