Phantomdraco said: "the guy has his hair frosted in panel 6" lice.

the guy has his hair frosted in panel 6

Fantastic! Awesome, it doesn't seem like any other basil comics:D

xVedris said: "Getting more interesting. :D Try to avoid having text go out of the panels. It can be a little confusing and looks messy. The purple text is kind of hard to read. Maybe choose a better color or use thought bubbles?" He can stroke it too ^^.

The storyline is impressive. You have a couple typos here and there but it's all good. Looking forward for the next issue

I couldn't keep reading after the: You saw my black hole part :D Sorry *snicker*

Never seen a mother leave her son like that "good bye soon" poof!

xVedris said: "Pointerzzz" sry, i've always wanted to do that

Getting more interesting. :D Try to avoid having text go out of the panels. It can be a little confusing and looks messy. The purple text is kind of hard to read. Maybe choose a better color or use thought bubbles?

I could barely see the tail o-o

1] Purple text is hard to read. Use literate fonts. 2] Your grammar can be fixed. But not necessarily. In comics, quotes, chat boxes, etc. grammar does not need to be correct. It's what the person says. If the person is a hillbilly, it would be better if u used incorrect grammar.

Poor mother. O:

This is a really good comic, the only downfall, imo, is the dialogue. I don't know if english is your first language or not, but the misspellings and the bad grammar is really ruining the entire comic for me.

Just constructive criticism: Please don't use the purple chat anymore. It's very hard to read.

penguinlvr said: "When DID he arrive? Why DOES he have a tail?" fixed, sucker