Check yes, kremy! page 2

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chrisxxp 10/09/08

it was kinda good in the first page...but now i just dont like it anymore -_-

z00ligator 10/09/08

this made me laugh when i read the bit where her dad came out and hes all like run baby run and all LOLOL xD

zephyic 10/09/08

i done this within 1 day.. and also in a rush.. there is bound to be mistake here and there... about the actions words... i want it to look there way to fill up empty and useless space... just an experimental wif style...

heckguy

Am I the only one who realizes he cursed in the first panel? ._. EDIT Hey Scoob! vvvvv

ScoobertyDoo

I don't think it was necessary to but *Prepared* and *Shout* and things like that. Their facial expressions stance should relate those things to us. Adding all those things just resulted in crowded panels. Clean it up a bit. Btw, it says he's tying his shoes, but the magically turn into sandals in the second panel o_o

Midgetron 10/08/08

i like the movement things you have

zephyic 10/08/08

lol... thank you ppl...

Etokapa 10/08/08

RIPS DEAD! Nice.

l3lader 10/08/08

devi1xjesse said: " So you see pictures moving?" Yes, yes i do.

devi1xjesse 10/08/08

l3lader said: "i played the song while watching this =P link " So you see pictures moving?

l3lader

i played the song while watching this =P link

vietsanity 10/08/08

hahah nice. =3

SolDjango 10/08/08

I GET IT! ROFL nice.

taotapp 10/08/08

Their emotions are in little *'s ;-;

l3lader 10/08/08

devi1xjesse said: "Whats with the *stands up* *pushed* are you like showing every movement?" You just answered your own question.