LOL gm logs off XP I love the O.O eyes you made

CluelessPost said: "lmao i love how the gm logs off =D"

lmao i love how the gm logs off =D

The chat bubbles seem a bit sloppy. Maybe an outline and try not to have any of the letters poppin' out. In Panel 5, it looks like you stretched out the person a little to fit the panel box. Don't make the scene fit the panel, make the panel fit the scene. Of course, make the scene sizes reasonable and neat. What I'm trying to say is that don't draw the panel outline before you get an idea of what you want. And if you need more to fill in necessary space, don't expand it, just select more. Also

Lol, the GM logs of how typical. Great storyline, and love the font. It makes it look like a comic because thats what is used in a lot of them? Name of the font, pm me if I could get it.

Not bad for a first attempt

hay that's my name :0

Did u get that from latale.. when u begin the game you get an iris prolouge thing

its not bad its better than somethings i saw here

Your eyes are hilariously bad. Might wanna work on it The "Ouch my ear" part saved it though.

The businessmans GM suitcase combined with his karate skillz are gunna pown robbers away.

Find a way to outline your speech bubbles, and make sure none of the text falls outside of the bubbles. Work on your custom faces too. Also try to not make those huge speech bubble things to show who said what, try to cut it down a bit. I'd also take a different font. And don't make the story line too clich�. :P It's the little things that make a decent comic look good.

Quick, to the next channel!

Etokapa said: "Which background did you make? Because the hot dog stand one is used pretty often." I think he means the overall background for the entire comic. Notice the maple leaves. On Topic: Nice start. The eyes can use some more clearing up on some panels. Nice job so far, good luck.

surprised banker at the bottom panel ftw.