the lack of emotions.. especially at the fighting scene.. it looks so wierd.. customemotionsplease

I love the original and witty editing.

Kyuthemc said: " Seriously? Because the sword the guy with the white hair has also has a scar. The shade also had white hair and a scar on his sword." Yup. My guy wearing red (Martin) wasn't supposed to have a scar on his sword, it's probably just a graphical glitch. I realize the story seems pretty cliche at this moment, but I'm almost done with the next piece, and it gets a lot less. Cliche that is. And thanks for the compliments everyone, I'm glad people liked this.

Calebwhisp said: " Lol, Gilead I actually stole from Stephen King's Dark Tower series. Very good by the way. I forgot about it being in Eragon." Seriously? Because the sword the guy with the white hair has also has a scar. The shade also had white hair and a scar on his sword.

oooh nice shadows =)

mangoman96 said: "Great edits, give credit to Eragon in this or make it as a tribute to Eragon. It is pretty much the same storyline but it seems good for a story though." Eragon? I can see how you've come to that idea from the "rescue kidnapped girl" part, but Eragon? I've read the first 2 and I'm going to read the 3rd, and I loved it but even I didn't connect it to Eragon. There's a lot of other stories where a captured girl needs rescue. EDIT: Okay, so there's the Gilead part and Arya=Anna. B

Really doubt you're gonna continue this. EDIT : -after comments were read- Oh, really? Good thing I didn't read Eragon. o-o

Not referrring to the comic but you got a SICKASS Lion's fang there

Great edits, give credit to Eragon in this or make it as a tribute to Eragon. It is pretty much the same storyline but it seems good for a story though.

Good plot Good storyline Suspense Excitement Character Traits Fine use of grammar GREAT Editing GREAT COMIC. My problem is originality. Eragon much? Captured girl?(Arya) Same location name?(Gilead) Legendary hero?(Brom) Giant shiny awesome sword?(Zar'roc) If you could make the story better than a "Captured helpless girl" This comic would be amazing.

GowFun said: "Very interesting indeed, plz continue :]" yesh.

a red fang!

That was freaking epic.

Very interesting indeed, plz continue :]

Gilead = Gil'ead = City from Eragon = Fail Wow. Nice editting skizzles though.