maplemagic23 said: "Lol is that thief dude me with different hair and cape o.o" It's you.. I think... I'm pretty sure I got it right. o.o I dunno, I couldn't see your avatar very well. Sorry.

Lol is that thief dude me with different hair and cape o.o

heckguy said: " How? Dude, image host step by step, I want to see this." Woo! BasilMarket's Comic Fighters TO THE RESCUEEEE!

xAzuris said: " I did. Still messed up. x.x" How? Dude, image host step by step, I want to see this.

heckguy said: " What she said. To make them smaller you take the part of the wall of it and put more towards the center." I did. Still messed up. x.x

xVedris said: " I have to ask you this: Did you make it smaller in BannedStory or did you just use the diagonal arrows in Paint? Also, I just noticed the green narration at the bottom. Is that part of the story? If it is, I would try to make it stand out more, because it blended in with the credits and stuff (which I normally don't read)." What she said. To make them smaller you take the part of the wall of it and put more towards the center.

xAzuris said: " Alright, thanks. As for the Banned Story bubbles, when I make them smaller, they always get distorted. (See Eclipse Chapter 1 Part 1)" I have to ask you this: Did you make it smaller in BannedStory or did you just use the diagonal arrows in Paint? Also, I just noticed the green narration at the bottom. Is that part of the story? If it is, I would try to make it stand out more, because it blended in with the credits and stuff (which I normally don't read).

xVedris said: "I find it kind of funny how a guy is yawning when he sees the scary dude wearing a mask with a flaming sword... If you're making him seem like he's talking, find a more scared face and edit the mouth. -omgnoway- Why is the guy is crying while fighting? I mean, if your eyes are closed and you're trying to defeat a monk with a sword, you would think that wouldn't be very effective. Also, you couldn't even see the blows to the main character. How would we know he actually got hit if

xAzuris said: " Which ones should I use then? And he was yawning cause he was saying 'Time to call it a night.' And they can walk around Zhiang." The bannedstory ones. And yes, they all walked around the guy with the flaming sword that's double their size.

I find it kind of funny how a guy is yawning when he sees the scary dude wearing a mask with a flaming sword... If you're making him seem like he's talking, find a more scared face and edit the mouth. -omgnoway- Why is the guy is crying while fighting? I mean, if your eyes are closed and you're trying to defeat a monk with a sword, you would think that wouldn't be very effective. Also, you couldn't even see the blows to the main character. How would we know he actually got hit if it wasn't for t

heckguy said: "Edit better next time. Try to make the legs straight and take out the arms in the second panel. And try making better facial expressions. I wouldn't be yawning when I see a monk with a flaming sword blocking the stairs. Speaking of which, how the hell did they get out when the monks are blocking the exit? And please use better speech bubbles next time. These were horrible." Which ones should I use then? And he was yawning cause he was saying 'Time to call it a night.' And they can

Edit better next time. Try to make the legs straight and take out the arms in the second panel. And try making better facial expressions. I wouldn't be yawning when I see a monk with a flaming sword blocking the stairs. Speaking of which, how the hell did they get out when the monks are blocking the exit? And please use better speech bubbles next time. These were horrible.

lol i like the fifth panel xD i think its time to call it a night lmao

Implanted said: "Why is there a monk attacking them?" Read the first part of Chapter One. You'll get it then. =]

Looks cool :D