Ahem..... <_<; yeaaa try working on your storyline sequence i mean that ninja thing just poped up outta nowhere and your story just jumps without much of a development, its confusing, and uhh idk ummm BACKGROUND pl0x? DX just a suggestion <_<

omigod it's those hideous eyes again.

ninja.....bandwagon much?

1. Nom nom nom let's all eat the speech bubbles 2. Salathan arrives at a strange place- wait what? what is this "strange place" it looks like a blank piece of sh... to me 3. hello my princess. How is your ninja training? "oh it's going well daddy. I'm exceeding in my class." like WHAT THE F*>!>?

Organize it better or stop.

That's some weird text bubble positioning.... it looks like they're barfing text. 0_0

1. wut kind of name is salathan 2. how in the heyll is dat girl a ninja wit dat teddy bear an a tiara 3. dat guy in the last box aint saying nothing special so he aint speakin outside the box 4. how did dis get accepted does basil admins like ppl get flamed or somethin

Some things to improve on: 1.As everyone already said, the chat bubble is in the person's mouth. 2.Background please That's all I got for now.

The Princess said: "Nomnomnom, this chat bubble is delicious!"

the heck is this

Lunshire, Ninja Training, chat bubbles� This comic's hilarious.

Etokapa said: "So this is what purgatory looks like." Isnt purgatory when you lie under oath? O-o

What king talks to his daughter using 'princess'...?

3, fishlips.

Please stop while you're behind. DX