Too much space and too little dialouge o.o

i <3 this :D make more pls

wait...what just happened.... I can't tell if this is supposed to be a joke or a comic

SnailStomper said: "In the second frame, his eyes look freaky. One is looking up and the other is staring down" loll so true

he went "omg 1st aid kit! damn....... lol w.e screw this"

LimeAnLemon said: "o.o ............... WHAT?"

o.o ............... WHAT?

In the second frame, his eyes look freaky. One is looking up and the other is staring down

For you people who do not understand. Someone sneaks up on the brothers and attacks one of them. He blocks it and fights back, but it doesn't do anything. The sneaky dude throws stars at him. They hit his arm, and he passes out. The other brother kills the sneaky dude with Meteor and heals his brother before going ahead.

ok... whats up with this story are 8 year olds taking over basilmarket now?

Wait...what? This comic seriously confused me. There was little to no transition between the panels and some of the panels were just too big. So in the end it was confusing, hard to follow, and just plain weird. Work a bit on the way you carry out your comics. Try to pretend you've never seen the comic before and see if you can understand what's happening. If not, you need to change some things. Don't worry, you'll get better

Bad... Simply bad.

Wow that was... pointless. :3 It's like the outline of most maplestory comics. Insert: - Flashy skills - Evil person - Good person - The End

It's like your just listing random events and not focusing on anything.

xblackwolfx said: "The dialogue is so straight to the point." I know, right? It's so fast paced that it's hard to get used to it. And who was the guy who killed his brother? And why is the mage able to just walk away from it all? Isn't the first bad guy still there, as well as the assassin? ._. Oh, k, so the first guy got meteor'd. Oh, but he healed his arm, right? I mean, did he just heal a corpse? What? o-o;