lilblizz said: " Nah thats not how my story goes" But we're inferring that this comic will be another cliche'd story. You can't make a comic about skittles and expect us to imply that soon the story will change and be about cows.

BigJimgm88 said: "This is another "omg there is a king and an evil guy and some magical item (in this case an elixir) and there will be epic battlez and friends will die and evil people laugh but then the king get peoplez to come with him and kill the evil dood"" Nah thats not how my story goes

The arrow wont miss thing has been done before by better comic makers :/

asali said: "It seems like just another cheezy maple comic.... can't anyone try something new?" Im guessing you mean something other than an adventure story?

It seems like just another cheezy maple comic.... can't anyone try something new?

Too much stuff in one issue..also it's nothing none of us wouldn't already have seen a hundread times before :/ And why does the prof sleep on hard metal floor o.o

lilblizz said: " what title would u give it?" I'm not completely sure how the storyline is going.

Punctuation, please. Otherwise, sure, keep going. There's nothing stale about it seeing as we've yet to see much at all, so it's got potential to be good.

Yes continue, but give frames a border.

try making the text bubbles more solid.

I'm no pro, and I know I wouldn't do better but I think adding more dots will help you improve the comic

Add: -Text outlines or text bubbles -A bed, he was sleeping on the floor? -Interpunction kkelvinn said: "I love how you show only the bottom part of her body." lol xD

GrammarNazi said: "The grammar sux."

Erm, why is the Legacy Elixir's creator just lying around not doing his job? Doesn't make sense. If that keeps up, then the elixir will NEVER be complete. A good start though, keep going. Just be more logical ^^,

Continue it please. :]