Eclipse chapter 1 part 1

Submitted by xAzuris

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Comments (15)

mattmo 10/06/08

I think it's fine...especially for your first comic, I found it easy to understand, and it has a decent plot.

AznForSell 10/05/08

FunkyMunky said: " Explain to me how that is. =-=" The world isn't basil and nobody has to listen to you. Everyone has their ideas and are welcome to share it, if they need to improve then let them unlike getting flamed for their first attempts. Scum.

FunkyMunky 10/05/08

Centenial said: " You think everything in the world is packed in the little world of Basil Market? Get a reality check. Or go outside." Explain to me how that is. =-=

Centenial 10/05/08

FunkyMunky said: "Seriously people, if all these comics are sooo cliche and similar*cough* darkthief12 *cough* devi1xjesse *cough* why don't you give me another example on basil screens, at least two if not more." You think everything in the world is packed in the little world of Basil Market? Get a reality check. Or go outside.

FunkyMunky 10/05/08

Seriously people, if all these comics are sooo cliche and similar*cough* darkthief12 *cough* devi1xjesse *cough* why don't you give me another example on basil screens, at least two if not more.

xAzuris 10/05/08

Problematique said: "My eyes, please dude, just stop making these." No. As for the Banned Story bubbles, I know. I will probably just make my own from now on.

Problematique 10/05/08

My eyes, please dude, just stop making these.

heckguy 10/05/08

xAzuris said: " I did use Banned Story speech bubbles. When I made them smaller, they got distorted for some reason. As for plagiarism, I have no idea what Hitman Reborn is." Whoa, THOSE are bannedstory text bubbles? Damn.

xAzuris 10/05/08

AJcursor said: "Take out those annoying black spaces that hold the story line in it, maybe just have the text in a read-able font at the bottom of the panel? Also use the bannedstory speech bubbles. They look so much better." I did use Banned Story speech bubbles. When I made them smaller, they got distorted for some reason. As for plagiarism, I have no idea what Hitman Reborn is.

devi1xjesse 10/05/08

Another comic that starts with" an ordianary guy just like you" "except that he has powers" then some guy wants it

AJcursor 10/05/08

Take out those annoying black spaces that hold the story line in it, maybe just have the text in a read-able font at the bottom of the panel? Also use the bannedstory speech bubbles. They look so much better.

darkthief331 10/05/08

i smell plagiarism. but it could be my hw. or not.

Centenial 10/05/08

xAzuris said: " Ahhh, but you're wrong. =P" No you're just in denial. :P

madboy1234 10/05/08

too much talkie..but i like the idea =)

l3lader 10/05/08

way not enough original dude