OMG THE BEST DRAWING FOR THE RIGHT HAND, i cant draw hands =(

Sebisher said: "I'd tap that" agreed

I like the way you did her hair. But, practice your proportions. Add more shading to the legs, and try to add a bit more "meat" onto your drawings.

I like the hand on the left a lot. =]

well, you need alot of work on the face and body proportions XD

yosher said: " Maybe its more maplistic than realistic" O_o... Isn't more maplistic leaning towards the chibi side? Big giant heads, practically no detail, missing noses, round hands? Not to mention this is rather not realistic. It's more anime/manga styled.

aurora24747 said: "It's pretty good. It's cute for one thing, but it's mainly just not proportional. Past her head... she just gets a bit overly skinny? Her neck is thin, her shoulders are narrow and her waist is thin, especially compared to the head size." Maybe its more maplistic than realistic

It's pretty good. It's cute for one thing, but it's mainly just not proportional. Past her head... she just gets a bit overly skinny? Her neck is thin, her shoulders are narrow and her waist is thin, especially compared to the head size.

It's cool altogether. The blushing makes it seem like it was intended for people to make perverted comments, but that's my opinion.

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Face is somewhat strange. Love the side drawings. Yes.

I like the face/hair style O: The body is kinda odd though o-o

her neck is pretty skinny and long, and her shoulders are too narrow. even though girls do have smaller shoulders than guys usually, if they're too small, then they can't hold up your head. xD her body seems to get narrower and narrower from the chest down to the legs. i used to have that habit a lot because i only concentrated on one part of the body instead of looking at it as a whole, so the proportions come out really screwed up. you should try to work on that. and work on anatomy as well. h

i think your drawing is actually better than your friends in the femenine aspects. It just seems more innocent lovely girl-ish compared to the other one. While the other one has softness to the facial aspects, this one captures me more.

wow you can draw quite well too. the body/legs/arms proportion seems a bit off...like the arms are longer than they should but maybe its me or cause the legs are cut off I dunno. Love the hair, and clothing shades, works well.