xVedris said: " The whole mercenary idea is great. I love it, I do. But, seriously, the way you're making is not that great. Someone could have a fabulous idea, but the execution might not be all that fabulous. Developing your story is one of the key points in having a successful series, but you're missing my point here. It's going way too slow. Take Eto's "Maple Legends" for example. He develops the story well and there's still always something in each issue that makes you want to keep reading.

heckguy said: ""Let's finish her!" "God, what an ameature!" "Gu-WAAAH" "All too easy..." "Don't think I forgot about you, big boy...." "EEEYYYAAAAAAA!" That's what she said. " This seriously made me crack up xD It does kinda show that the dialogue is weird xD

SilverFoxR said: "First off, I'm gonna directly comment on the "slow progression" comments, because I think it's safe to say some people don't get it. Freelancers was made as an adventure series, not specificly drawn to action sequences every other comic. There are plenty of comics out there that do plenty of fighting with little direction other than one particular goal. If that's your cup of tea, that's cool. However, this is being written more like a story that tries to create a world and char

SilverFoxR said: "Okay, I have a question for all the flamers who've posted nothing but crap so far, such as "cliche", "overused" and other random stupidity. If you don't like it, why are you even posting? Seriously, I'm not inviting you to come in here to talk crap - I'm doing things for my own enjoyment and for the people who genuinely like what I do. If you don't, get lost. I'm not catering to some arrogant little brats who have nothing better to do than try to insult others for some pathetic

The comic is fine. Jeez, whats this about a cliche, I mean seriously =-=. cliche is a phrase, expression, or idea that has been overused to the point of losing its intended force or novelty You're guys' flames and so-called "critique" is a cliche. Its actually GOOD compared to others, y'know.

First off, I'm gonna directly comment on the "slow progression" comments, because I think it's safe to say some people don't get it. Freelancers was made as an adventure series, not specificly drawn to action sequences every other comic. There are plenty of comics out there that do plenty of fighting with little direction other than one particular goal. If that's your cup of tea, that's cool. However, this is being written more like a story that tries to create a world and characters and tell th

Yeah sorry to cliche. Main characters need to get killed More plot twiztz plz More innocent civilians dieing please. YsoOverpowered? WaisoCheezy? Moardramaplz. An non xVedrised comment on how to make your comics more pleasing to basil community.

Your cliche plot-line is going even slower than xxDrakxx's(?) series. Work on that.

SilverFoxR said: " Seriously... these "overused" or "cliche" comments are more overdone than the comics they are directed at." Maybe because it's true. SilverFoxR said: "Okay, I have a question for all the flamers who've posted nothing but crap so far, such as "cliche", "overused" and other random stupidity. If you don't like it, why are you even posting? Seriously, I'm not inviting you to come in here to talk crap - I'm doing things for my own enjoyment and for the people who genuinely like wha

Okay, I have a question for all the flamers who've posted nothing but crap so far, such as "cliche", "overused" and other random stupidity. If you don't like it, why are you even posting? Seriously, I'm not inviting you to come in here to talk crap - I'm doing things for my own enjoyment and for the people who genuinely like what I do. If you don't, get lost. I'm not catering to some arrogant little brats who have nothing better to do than try to insult others for some pathetic attempt to sound

XxGerryxX said: "No, hes right. I can barely watch this without yawning twice. I didnt even watch like 10 episodes. Probably the first 10 were good , but now its just a long, boring plot, theres nothing interesting here. Yeah great edditing, but who cares about that when the plotline is freaking boring/cliched/ just plainly sucks? Seriously, like we havent seen these kind of dialogues in Power rangers batle scenes -___-" seriously, now its just going too slow. seems very biased towards the main

XxGerryxX said: "No, hes right. I can barely watch this without yawning twice. I didnt even watch like 10 episodes. Probably the first 10 were good , but now its just a long, boring plot, theres nothing interesting here. Yeah great edditing, but who cares about that when the plotline is freaking boring/cliched/ just plainly sucks? Seriously, like we havent seen these kind of dialogues in Power rangers batle scenes -___-" Explain how this is cliched....

Mallu said: " No it doesn't.You do. It's the best comic at Basilmarket." No, hes right. I can barely watch this without yawning twice. I didnt even watch like 10 episodes. Probably the first 10 were good , but now its just a long, boring plot, theres nothing interesting here. Yeah great edditing, but who cares about that when the plotline is freaking boring/cliched/ just plainly sucks? Seriously, like we havent seen these kind of dialogues in Power rangers batle scenes -___-

lol,the dart looked kind of lame xD but good comic! :]

CykoDuck said: "This comic sucks" No it doesn't.You do. It's the best comic at Basilmarket.