My spider sense is tingling! *kacheeng* I hate it when the main character can anticipate when some frigging ninja jumps from some bushes and attacks..

DeathPsycho said: "Well, you went from 4 panels to like 4 1/2 panels. Tip: More panels = more interesting" True he did improve on more panels by one little step Btw ur editing skills have potential to make a good comic You just need a better story line, more panels

mastercheeze said: "What little there is is pretty neat. What program did you make this in?" Probably Photoshop, seeing how it's in the credits. DiamondAxel said: "Is that IAmRight?" The only thing they have in common is the Bushido band, so i guess not.

You need more panels. And that main character SUCKS.

Rule one of character making. NEVER. EVER! EVER! Make an emo main character. Thats like sasuke. And look how he is know! Got that one chick trailing him all the time, like.... sailor moon or something. Anyway it is REALLY REALLY RANDOM! xD Explaination before fighting.

As nice as the editing is, this is seriously random. And its hard to squeeze plot into a 4 panel comic.

I don't get why the mage is all like "I don't care, shut up." And pay more attention to making it longer, not good looking.

What little there is is pretty neat. What program did you make this in?

It looks so clean. :O Well done.

That guy is like a abuser..

soranokira said: " Thats not true, there was that one panel KS-ing one which was Hilarious. And back on topic, these kinds of stories are over done, people walk, some dude comes and attacks and they stare at each other for like 2 panels." Ummm, I doubt thats a comic... (Like a series ) So you prefer one paneled series? As this is a series...

DeathPsycho said: "Well, you went from 4 panels to like 4 1/2 panels. Tip: More panels = more interesting" Thats not true, there was that one panel KS-ing one which was Hilarious. And back on topic, these kinds of stories are over done, people walk, some dude comes and attacks and they stare at each other for like 2 panels.

DarkOdor said: "-_- 1. Too short. 2. Boring. 3. No emotions? 4. How come the guy gives a random "Shut up"? R u like 5? 5. Whats with the picture when they get attacked? 6. Flame,flame,flame,flame." The girl is talking in bold which states she is talking about something important or she is talking loud. (If you notice, her mouth is BIG when she talks, which would mean she's a "big mouth") The guy is talking in "italics" in a way. Thin and small which would make you infer that he doesn't like talk

-_- 1. Too short. 2. Boring. 3. No emotions? 4. How come the guy gives a random "Shut up"? R u like 5? 5. Whats with the picture when they get attacked? 6. Flame,flame,flame,flame.

Is that IAmRight?