Jeez, guys. It's not easy making comics! You really don't want to see my first attempt at a comic. It was horrendous. -shudder- So just give the guy a break! Instead of saying, "OMG you suck, just stop now plz," give him some actual advice on how to get better. Even if you don't make comics, I'm sure there was something you tried out that you weren't very good at when you started. Practice makes perfect. And that's what he's doing: practicing. And sorry to those of you who're perfect at anything

Ahaha, wow. This sucks so bad :D

Stop. You're really bad at this. Truth hurts, but really. This is the most cliche comic ever. - Someone finds a collapsed girl, though dressed in level 110 items. - Dark figure is there, and obviously the attacker - Protagonist uses godmode, kills dark figure. This is the millionth time someone's done this. Comics are only good if you know how to edit. And don't use chatspeak in comics. Either learn English, or don't use it.

why did he turn into a chickent that fights with feathers?

I'm guessing she was going to say phro...pecy...

Advice: I'm not trying to be mean but you should stop the series. You can obviously see basil is being it's moronic flaming hate wall... all you're going to do is get a screen with 3 likes and 600 flame posts. Like I said I'm not trying to be mean but, it'd probably be better than having a bunch of retards flaming the screen till it's burnt to a 4th degree...

Spartan119 said: "Let's recap. A guy who has yet to be named wakes up, with no memory, talks to Mr. Game and Watch, finds a girl fighting a monster, she gets pwned, the guy gets all mad, transforms, takes a slice at the monster, and then faints? I don't see where you're going with this." Someone needs to throw a chair!

Kyensho said: " How can this even be called a comic? It's just a piece of sh**. Crap zooms, crap pictures, crap characters, crap back round. Oh and for you people reading this too, your little "Let's see you do better." Do I really have to even try to do better than this?" Probably. . . . . . . I don't know.

Let's recap. A guy who has yet to be named wakes up, with no memory, talks to Mr. Game and Watch, finds a girl fighting a monster, she gets pwned, the guy gets all mad, transforms, takes a slice at the monster, and then faints? I don't see where you're going with this.

9 likes, you should be proud of yourself, not...just stop bro

Just stop....

xxxangelxxx said: "Cliche piece of *bleep* I can make bette rcomics withym eyes closed. 1 hand be hind my back and my computer off. Yes. Its THAT bad." How can this even be called a comic? It's just a piece of sh**. Crap zooms, crap pictures, crap characters, crap back round. Oh and for you people reading this too, your little "Let's see you do better." Do I really have to even try to do better than this?

Lost mapler = me

xxxangelxxx said: "Cliche piece of *bleep* I can make bette rcomics withym eyes closed. 1 hand be hind my back and my computer off. Yes. Its THAT bad." Overkilled O_o

He's angry... You wouldnt like him when he's angry! -incredibile hulk theme song- No seruosly i'm beyond lost. Aww cat nads!