Robbeh said: " ...Excuse me? When you put the sentence like this, it's wrong to say has and not have, since you're directing it over to the people, and not "John" himself. It should be "(...)the people who have elemental powers."" Failed Grammar Nazi.

k, ill try changing the font. name- already have story for that storyline- ull see grammar- english my 2nd language.. so ill try my best finishing the 2nd one on saturday

Change font colour please! And Un-Cliche the next 1 :D

angramainyu said: "Dead parents? Check. Destroyed village/kingdom? Check. Antagonist in a black robe? Check. Misuse of blur? Check. Base of storyline that drags on for fifteen comics? Check! Congratulations, you have made a Basilmarket comic." Hmmm...On my first comic...i had the base of storyline that'll drag on for 15 comics

Little cliche. Good editing, though. If you manage to put a lot of twists in it, it'll be exciting and unpredictable. :]

mastercheeze said: " Of the people is a prepositional phrase and thus ignored. You're right about "one" being the subject, but I just wanted to explain why "people" doesn't work." You weren't very clear, cheezey. shame D:

trevtsang said: " WRONG! "One of the people who has elemental powers" Is correct, because: The subject is "One". What many of you are thinking is that "People" is the subject, but you are wrong. Since it is used with an "of the", it is an adjective describing the subject, which in this case, is "one". Try saying the sentence without "of the people" "One who has elemental powers" Sounds correct, right? Now with "of the people" in its place... "Of the people who has elemental powers" Wrong :]" Of

Robbeh said: " ...Excuse me? When you put the sentence like this, it's wrong to say has and not have, since you're directing it over to the people, and not "John" himself. It should be "(...)the people who have elemental powers."" WRONG! "One of the people who has elemental powers" Is correct, because: The subject is "One". What many of you are thinking is that "People" is the subject, but you are wrong. Since it is used with an "of the", it is an adjective describing the subject, which in this

I sense the comedy in this. Obviously, most Basilers here don't know how to critique. The fact that you mock the plain old Basil comics makes this one VERY interesting. Please don't disappoint me. :]

Skrato said: " Actually "who have elemental powers" and "who has elemental powers" are both correct in this situation. However, it's "more" correct to use "who has elemental powers" because the person who has the powers is the subject, the subject is singular and so you should use "has". If you were talking about "the people over there, who have elemental powers" using "have" is correct, but adressing one of them, " John is one of the people who has elemental powers". " ...Excuse me? When you pu

EDIT: Skipped a panel. Nvm

angramainyu said: "Dead parents? Check. Destroyed village/kingdom? Check. Antagonist in a black robe? Check. Misuse of blur? Check. Base of storyline that drags on for fifteen comics? Check! Congratulations, you have made a Basilmarket comic." Haha i just realized i have half of those on mine.

angramainyu said: "Dead parents? Check. Destroyed village/kingdom? Check. Antagonist in a black robe? Check. Misuse of blur? Check. Base of storyline that drags on for fifteen comics? Check! Congratulations, you have made a Basilmarket comic." So true

angramainyu said: "Dead parents? Check. Destroyed village/kingdom? Check. Antagonist in a black robe? Check. Misuse of blur? Check. Base of storyline that drags on for fifteen comics? Check! Congratulations, you have made a Basilmarket comic." You forgot "Elemental Powers"

He totally just took the color off my character's face and gave him different clothes. Boo. >=O