The elementals-3

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lamRight

KirbyHunter said: "u fked up all the faces and it seems really childish and dumb" *Gasp* on a 10+ website? Who would have known that there would be childish stuff in here? Not me obviously. Let us not call anything childish for we are all united under one childish thing, which is maple story.

Dragonzrkool 09/16/08

Blueisorange said: "Wow he had chain lightning ever since he was level 0. He IS pro." Let's just say: I would run o_o

heckguy 09/16/08

y u heck? Don't edit the faces like that, it looks really horrible. And why did that guy make the 'in love' face when he wanted to make a team? Maybe in time he wants to be something a bit MORE.

Pramenox

a Few tips when making a comic, that seems to make me like it. Use the same font size. Don't progress the plot too fast or slow. Trying to your best ability to make it look smooth Humor. At least double or triple check it. Only use a different font size when its necessary. Like when they are yelling. And make words stand out. I like it so far, bit shaky here and there. I'm not a comic maker though. x)

bananaeatU 09/16/08

I very like what u did for combinations of expressions, however, the comic was a bit misunderstandable to me.

saintlove 09/16/08

Blueisorange said: "Wow he had chain lightning ever since he was level 0. He IS pro." I totally agree

SoulKeeper 09/15/08

white ppl and black ppl dont work well together!

Blueisorange 09/15/08

Wow he had chain lightning ever since he was level 0. He IS pro.

SolDjango 09/15/08

idk. there's something about this comic that just doesn't make me like it. I think you're moving the plot too fast. But honestly, i can't tell. sorry.

kkelvinn 09/15/08

I like their faces

joannersfd

What a variety of expressions...

MMan222 09/15/08

EWWW what did you DO to their faces? I can't help but be reminded of those ugly MS advertisements with the really screwed up F2s... How can you mess up Bannedstory so badly? It puts the faces on right by itself.. >_>

DrkThunder 09/15/08

On Topic: Nice work Off Topic: Why does a mage have a stormcaster other than it has a lightning bolt on it?

FrostKun 09/15/08

ImKafei said: "I like this series, but what's up with the faces? O_____O" r u srs?

HahaMelia 09/15/08

infferrno said: "Could've made the "Team up" a little more sutul. (Spelling check please.)" Subtle* Yeah, I kinda agree with you.