The beggining of a story 1

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Fatalixx

the girl warrior looks good. they should add a sheathe weapon thing in maplestory

DiamondAxel

Man that scythe resembles that of Zatrox's.

Tsukuda 09/04/08

I'm not gonna lie, that's a bad-ass scythe.

tim5240 09/04/08

lololololol he spelled beginning wrong

germy300 09/04/08

Provide a background story for the people.

iMakeFail 09/04/08

Gorfindle said: "I like Xenace's hair." So do I. :D

Purewizard 09/04/08

Looks very interesting. Good edits, nice and clear. I like the plot so far. Just one, very, big, mistake. The complete look of the 'boss' That look is so overused i dont have any words for it.

Gorfindle 09/04/08

I like Xenace's hair.

FlaminQuincy 09/04/08

those two warriors look sooo cool!

Etokapa 09/03/08

Great job on the editing! Though for the next chapter, make sure you fix the typo in the title.

Gemeinhardt 09/03/08

Looks interesting. I think the idea your going with here. Keep going. :]

JusJay 09/03/08

wow this is awsome

DarkEternity 09/03/08

I don't like the title, you should change it. I mean, after 20 episodes, is it still the beginning of a story? I'm not so sure.'

mechaultra19

yukie123 said: " Lol never! It shall run on and on like the naruto manga" Zing. But on topic, it looks really interesting, and I do hope to see more.

Fighterdoken 09/03/08

Cool stuff :3