3/10. Bad use of a pun.

xoxCarmen said: "Did you make this jamie? Or is this someone else? ._." Lol. Carmen no i didn't. The girl was the original owner of this account, Jade, made it for Survey Comp for our daily pun unit because I taught her how to use bannedstory. Lol When I saw this was accepted, I was like, ROFL. But she's not going to see these comments, so it's all good. Our class got a kick out of it too. :D

Did you make this jamie? Or is this someone else? ._.

It was a witty concept but wasn't established well enough.

MakeMeRich said: "So the mom turns into a snail after the student randomly asks what happens when he gets old. Wow this sucks. The joke was only mediocre, and the execution was horrible. Only semi-good thing was the editing." ...This was a joke...?

Nice joke. And poster below me, I dont think athena pierce was the mom, when did it say that? And this is basilmarket, not a comic class, you don't need to be so critisizing Edit - oops, nvm, didnt see the title lolz

So the mom turns into a snail after the student randomly asks what happens when he gets old. Wow this sucks. The joke was only mediocre, and the execution was horrible. Only semi-good thing was the editing.

AFD said: " Bow like take a bow and quiver like shake. Bow is what shoots the arrows and a quiver is what holds them." ooo....right.....

It's alright, the title and the placement of the joke don't seem to fit together. No mention of heaven as said in the title... The kid asks what happens when he grows old, but the answer seems to be plural or they and claiming the term dieing too. Why mention death too? and since when is there more than one person asking?

I'm laughing at both the joke and the basilers that don't get the joke. XD

RightJustice said: "I think the joke was something like, when you get old you "Bow" (as in bow-wow), and that's used as a sort of pun for Bowman? Iunno..that's what I understood o.O" For starters, your an idiot. Bow as in a bow you shoot and bow like bending over. Quiver as in something you hold arrows in or as in shake. Make more comics because for once, there is a funny basiler.

Rex191 said: "Didnt get it o_o" Bow like take a bow and quiver like shake. Bow is what shoots the arrows and a quiver is what holds them.

The boy said "I hate archery" with a quiver Eh?

lol, so many people don't get itxD it's a good joke, but on basil market, you need to use very simple jokes.

Didnt get it o_o