dude this is like Zatrox's story, some bad guy comes in to a place guarded and kicks their butt.....except zatrox's was funny

RightJustice said: " Lol nice rhyme :D But, I still think a banner is an essential part of the comic as any person who has no idea about your comic would first look at the banner and get a feel of how the comic is and what are the abilities of the comic maker. Take the "Last Quest" banner for example, it must've taken GodODons atleast 3 hours to do that XD" His name is Gofsodon. And dude, that banner probably took half an hour if he knew what he was doing o_0 Have you ever used Photoshop? If you

AFD said: "Lol advice from RightJustice." Inorite?

the title is really cliche, except for the name ashura.

xttlvx said: "is it me or uh... why is he suddenly alone in panel 3?" Yeah, that panel was weird..

is it me or uh... why is he suddenly alone in panel 3?

oooo shiny object, go pick up!

Too much of the cliche fighting comics, it's getting old.

woot! screeching swords. I clicked the like it because of that.

Pointers: The quality is a bit low, try saving it on a program like paint.net, or gimp. the banner could use better editing, just one of my pet peeves. and try to take away as much blank space as possible. other then that, good work.

I only liked Panel 7 because it had screeching swords.

Isn't Ashura the owner of Sleepywood? 0_0

were'd u get the backround

Lol advice from RightJustice.

So, when are you going to quit this series. We have the first one that went to episode 4 and the second that went to 1. I personally thought this might only be half a comic.