Um...why does the storyline of these comics seem so clich�d.....and also it reminds me of jumper..also you cant really take maple characters seriously with a storyline such as this i think you should give up

Uhm..im sorry i don't understand why you would make Jumper into a maplestory series.

i dont think comic life is a good program to make this o.o it can if you make the boxes smaller.. the pictures smaller dam do you even know how to use comic life? ><

I wouldn't be surprised if he teleported right next to his brother and beat the crap out of him because he can't see anything and thought it was a bad guy.

My Pointers: • The plot is moving at a rate at which it's hard to relate, connect, or know who the characters are. Chapter 2, Part 1: The guy gets a phone call that his brother is kidnapped (he shows no emotion). Chapter 2, Part 2: The guy gets to the place (still with not much emotion. Bit of an improvement, but it seems like he doesn't care much). I mean, I'm glad that the plot is moving along so it's not completely boring, but it's just moving too fast . Chapter 2 and it's already time to con

how does he even see through the mask? o_o

Rex191 said: "Kidnappers wear pink :o?" Maybe he stole it off someone he Kidnapped? :O

lol his mask is weird.. good tho

mirkle said: "Bleh, comic life, banned story, and perhaps 20 minutes is all it takes to make a comic like this." Jealous much ?

make more ;)

Bleh, comic life, banned story, and perhaps 20 minutes is all it takes to make a comic like this.

Kidnappers wear pink :o?

I don't really get the point of a blindfold if he's being guarded by a dagger anyways O.o But nice suspense xD

He reminds me of the guy from bleach but i forgot his name...

Are you sure you haven't watched Jumper? ._.