ROFL, id just reccomend making dialogue smoother instea dof 1,2,3

RightJustice said: " Wow you look exactly like that Cheexits girl except for the eyes.... And I thought it was funny because it was a good joke, even though it wasn't presented very well." Hah.

even if a dog pooped in front of me eating something i wouldnt throw it like than

FrostKun said: "This isn't your best title, but this is your first comic?" this is her first comic and she say its not the best title as in its not the best title she doesn't mean its not her best title.

This isn't your best title, but this is your first comic?

• You made the people sit in the background, some people wont clearly see it and think they are flying, and the dog is flying in the 3rd pannel.

xVedris said: "My Pointers: • Order of the chat bubbles confused me. First you numbered them. Then you did right to left, then left to right. Try to keep it consistent, so people have a clue what to read first. Most common ways of reading is top to bottom or left to right, or in manga, right to left (but it's not prefered, seeing how most comics on Basil aren't manga). " I'm not sure what you were thinking, but in every panel the chat bubbles go from right to left. However I agree on Basil that

DeathPsycho said: " Anyway, chat goes left to right...not right to left. 6/10" I wanted my dad to be the one that talked mostly. ( He told me this story when he was younger :P) So yeah, I'll try that next time.

xVedris said: "My Pointers: • Order of the chat bubbles confused me. First you numbered them. Then you did right to left, then left to right. Try to keep it consistent, so people have a clue what to read first. Most common ways of reading is top to bottom or left to right, or in manga, right to left (but it's not prefered, seeing how most comics on Basil aren't manga). • Try to add a bit of the tile (floor) in the background, so it looks like the dog is actually standing on something. Also, the

My Pointers: • Order of the chat bubbles confused me. First you numbered them. Then you did right to left, then left to right. Try to keep it consistent, so people have a clue what to read first. Most common ways of reading is top to bottom or left to right, or in manga, right to left (but it's not prefered, seeing how most comics on Basil aren't manga). • Try to add a bit of the tile (floor) in the background, so it looks like the dog is actually standing on something. Also, the last two panels

DeathPsycho said: " What? Anyway, chat goes left to right...not right to left. 6/10" Japanese books?

kevin104401 said: "why use huskies when there are real dogs mmm" sense?

Constructive critisism tiem! 1.Don't number your sayings, if you want a text bubble to be number 2, put it under the layer of text bubble 1. 2.Align and edit the panels better. theres a rectangle spot coming out of panel 4. 3.Add a floor. 4. On the 4th panel, throw up doesnt land on air does it? Try and extend it. 5.Fifth panel's cut.

why use huskies when there are real dogs mmm

lol i saw it too!