Aphlack said: " Lol... u type too much" Considering how much you need to type for school, that post was basically nothing.

xVedris said: "My Pointers: • The last one you submitted looks identical to this one... At least delete the old ones. xD • Usually chat bubbles in comics are ready from left to right or from top to bottom. This is not the case in this one. Try to put some signification on which order the chat bubbles should be read. o_o Maybe even number them (though I personally don't like that). Because when I read the first chat bubble on the left in the first panel, I figured out that it was supposed to be r

My Pointers: • The last one you submitted looks identical to this one... At least delete the old ones. xD • Usually chat bubbles in comics are ready from left to right or from top to bottom. This is not the case in this one. Try to put some signification on which order the chat bubbles should be read. o_o Maybe even number them (though I personally don't like that). Because when I read the first chat bubble on the left in the first panel, I figured out that it was supposed to be read 2nd. This h

Since you acknowledged your grammatical/spelling errors, otherwise, I guess it's interesting...

Not to be mean but I swear you submitted this 3 times.

I like it so far, o.0 Go ahead with it :D

Seems..Intresting.