I LOVE IT, it's building up to the plot. Continue....

I think you should tell more about the plot.

xVedris said: "My Pointers: • The title text reminded me of the "disco era". xD • Nice editing. :D • The backgrounds are off from panels 1 - 6. They seem to magically move from one spot to another without any transition according to the backdrop. I don't think a lot of people will notice it, but it's good to have the backdrops match from each panel to panel. • I like how there's no blood whatsoever. Yes, yes, Basil frowns upon blood, but even a little splurt or drop could be nice. Even when the

awwww....You shoulda X'ed out the eyes and show red lines on the bottom of the head to show blood and have like a body too.......covered with blood of course! And the only things in color should be blood......

My Pointers: • The title text reminded me of the "disco era". xD • Nice editing. :D • The backgrounds are off from panels 1 - 6. They seem to magically move from one spot to another without any transition according to the backdrop. I don't think a lot of people will notice it, but it's good to have the backdrops match from each panel to panel. • I like how there's no blood whatsoever. Yes, yes, Basil frowns upon blood, but even a little splurt or drop could be nice. Even when the guy got his hea

littlemario8 said: "So a dude wakes up and randomly blurts out "this is the story of black thomas" nice." Don't forget his dream in Gray-Scale with people killing eachother. ._.

i c wat u did thar.

littlemario8 said: "So a dude wakes up and randomly blurts out "this is the story of black thomas" nice." Any text written in a white box not leading to a character is a narrator. "Nice".

So a dude wakes up and randomly blurts out "this is the story of black thomas" nice.

This looks interesting. Please continue.