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ElvenSoma 08/17/08

Omegathorion said: " ............................ What has the world come to. JOHN LOCKE WAS A FAMOUS ENGLISH PHILOSOPHER. NOT SOME KIND OF NAME FROM A VIDEO GAME." John Locke is also the name of a main character in LOST :3

Omegathorion 08/16/08

Derekk said: "locke? Locke sounds stolen.. :O (hinthint ffvi)" ............................ What has the world come to. JOHN LOCKE WAS A FAMOUS ENGLISH PHILOSOPHER. NOT SOME KIND OF NAME FROM A VIDEO GAME.

Derekk 08/16/08

locke? Locke sounds stolen.. :O (hinthint ffvi)

CrazehSinX 08/15/08

I'm gonna call that face "Overused Super Angry Face that makes you able to kill anything"

xKairuko 08/15/08

dudeguy said: "I sense another great comic series :D"

dudeguy 08/15/08

I sense another great comic series :D

CtrlPlusZ 08/15/08

I think that angry face is often misused. This is an example. Would that guy be enraged when he was about to be attacked? I think he'd be more surprised.

quang13 08/15/08

• Like Vedris said, the plot is pretty clich� by how the guy's friend gets killed and the protagonist wants revenge • When the bad guy suddenly appears, why does Locke's friend tell him to get behind him when he's like 2 meters away? o_O

xVedris

My Pointers: • It's getting really cliche now. o_o A guy whose friend/brother/dad/family-member gets killed right in front of him and he then wants to avenge their dead friend/brother/dad/family-member. Add some twists here and there. :D • The "2 Minutes Later..." thing in the flashback was kind of unnecessary. There's no need to put an exact time on when something happened if an exact time isn't an important part of the comic. • The blood was weird. It reminded me of amoebas. I would say that l

DeathPsycho 08/15/08

Its laughable, the amount of comics with flashbacks where their friend/brother/father was killed...

devi1xjesse 08/15/08

its too short nothing interesting happens maybe a little in this one but yea...

jetpilot55 08/15/08

RightJustice said: "I think your going a bit too fast with the story, maybe try to go slow? And where did that guy come from and how did it jump from the guy sitting down to him fighting?" It's a flashback scene, if you look at the first comic you'll notice that the first gray panel is an almost exact copy.

RightJustice 08/15/08

I think your going a bit too fast with the story, maybe try to go slow? And where did that guy come from and how did it jump from the guy sitting down to him fighting?

UchihaMikal 08/15/08

This is sooo ORIGINAL

DiamondAxel 08/15/08

Where that guy come from?