This is one of the few comics I'm rooting for. Good luck with the comics.

High expectations for this comic, the way you put it having its own unique date and such. -clicks I liek-

Jeez there are enough comics as it is.

quang13 said: "-For the first page, the characters aren't even introduced -Rather confusing for a fight to happen straight away for no reason -"Dragon warrior" and a fight between 2 people different levels? Clich� much? EDIT: Erm, the comic notes that it was made in 2004, so does that mean you just took it from the stack of old works? >_> Cmon, put more effort it in." It's even more cliche to give names in the very begginning. To your edit, no. I had a spur of the moment idea to do something wit

xVedris said: "My Pointers: • Nothing much to say here, seeing how there are only 4 panels. o_o • But! In the first two panels, the background is messed up. The black-haired guy is standing near the tree in the 4th panel, but he's farther away in the 1st one. The red-haired guy is near the hill, but in the 3rd panel he's nowhere near the hill. Nothing too major, but try to spot things that may be off in their positions. • I'm personally not THAT interested in what happens next. It's a bit... don

-For the first page, the characters aren't even introduced -Rather confusing for a fight to happen straight away for no reason -"Dragon warrior" and a fight between 2 people different levels? Clich� much? EDIT: Erm, the comic notes that it was made in 2004, so does that mean you just took it from the stack of old works? >_> Cmon, put more effort it in.

I'm willing to work hard on this if you're willing to read it. That right there, changed my mind about this comic. Keep going.

The "Dragon Warrior" reminds me of Kung Fu Panda, lol. :D

AlanNgyn93 said: "Lean how to start off with like a attention grabber." Learn how to type properly. Then I'll think about using attention grabbers.

Lean how to start off with like a attention grabber.

My Pointers: • Nothing much to say here, seeing how there are only 4 panels. o_o • But! In the first two panels, the background is messed up. The black-haired guy is standing near the tree in the 4th panel, but he's farther away in the 1st one. The red-haired guy is near the hill, but in the 3rd panel he's nowhere near the hill. Nothing too major, but try to spot things that may be off in their positions. • I'm personally not THAT interested in what happens next. It's a bit... done already. Blac

Yos2 said: "Comics like this always end the same way. They fail." LOL

UseTheForce said: "The red hair guy's entire face is open to attacks, not to mention the fact that his arm, side, and leg are completely unprotected; and who fights with Penguin Slippers? " I do, as a matter of fact.

okay? im still kinda lost

No idea what's going on, but I'll read more. ;3