RightJustice said: "Mistakes: • You copy+pasted a panel and made no changes what so ever in it. Hint: Don't do that. • Legund is not a word. It's Legend. Hint: Just because there's probably a comic named "Legend" doesn't mean changing the spelling of the word will make it any better. • Your story is very bouncy. Introducing the characters in the main priority in the first part of a series, not getting on with the story. You should have introduced the "rebel" in the 7th and 8th panel, because now

Why do my eyes bleed? WRYYYYYYYYYYYY? Big - obvious - mistake. what repeat panels lol suk.

LOL@Doublepanelolololol

what is this? Do you get some kind of awkward kicks for posting bad comics and getting flamed? Some kind of.. Online masochist? O_o. Continue the Story of Mizuno before I track you down! >:O

hobobob said: "... Repeat of panels. Critical mistake."

I think you mixed up the bubbles in the fourth to last panel.

LOL! I'm sorry this was so badly made that I lol'd. You just might NOT want to repeat the panels. Also, were you trying to spell "Legend" instead of "Legund"?

Are the kids dense? they asked the same question twice? har har har.

hobobob said: "... Repeat of panels. Critical mistake."

... Repeat of panels. Critical mistake.

LULZ at panel repeat!

I'm sorry dude I quit on having hope you would continue a series , I liked your survival series then you quit it, why? Re continue it please it was getting good

Is "Legund" supposed to be spelled like that? Or did you just make a spellnig error EDIT: And what kinda name is "Fargas"...

Survival was better... but why does mrbasil keep accepting his comics?

xVedris said: " e.e -gets out my huge box o' stuff-" rightjustice, take a look at the comic and say it again. (;