StarSystem said: "In the second last panel, it looked like he had a huuuuuugeee accident..." epic accident...

In the second last panel, it looked like he had a huuuuuugeee accident...

GodSpeed?

i think it wouldnt have been so bad if there wasnt already something(s) made quite similar to it, and try to improve the grammar/spelling please you put it together okay tho

MadSniper said: "The scenes are kind of well.. dull. Try changing up the positions a bit more, or even the backgrounds. This was pretty much 9 panels of text =/" it was suppose to be background on the story so text was needed to explain it

Good. But, I guess you can add some facial emotions xD. Still pretty good overall.

I agree with MadSniper.

The scenes are kind of well.. dull. Try changing up the positions a bit more, or even the backgrounds. This was pretty much 9 panels of text =/