Nicely done I liked it but the white hair guy reminds me of Sephiroth

This is basicly FMA minus the awsomeness...

I liked the title.

It's a bit messy and cliche, but we'll see...

Why is this so similar to the first National Treasure?

For some reason I keep seeing the white haired dude dressed as Sephiroth.. But other than that, nicely done. xD

I WANNA BE INNNNN me me meeee

Micheal Jackson waiting behind the stall for the boy. What will happen next chapter? Stay tuned and find out... =P This comic was good though, can't wait for next one =D

This is actually pretty good editing here, thought i might suggest to improve the plot a little bit.. Cuz its like sum kid just reads a book n says "Hey lets go find these elements." Don't get me wrong. Im not trying to flame, everything else is good, just work on the plot a little ^^

Woahwoahwoah! Probably the best comic title there to be in Basilmarket xD

i3xk00ixkid said: " Why do you have a tail? Why is my avatar gray.." Why do you have a leaf in your mouth?

Story is somewhat cliche from what I can see.

title is so awesome

the last panel seems pointless. i think it would be better if he looked back and the shadow was gone. ?

The flower in his mouth makes him look stupid.