iono but I thought it was hilarious. [Mainly the facial expression of the GM when he was using the ban hammer] o.o

Did you bust the GM Mobile on the last panel? o-o

It makes no sense.

calm down guys dude, u can begin by telling us if the way of reading is manga style or ocidental comics style i cant understand cause this is little too

One word: What?

question: are you 10? no offense

Could you possibly upload the original size and then link it(if it is readable)? Just a suggestion, and that way we can all actually read it even if you can't see it on Basil. :s

funny. attemp to make it bigger.

do it bigger, i think it will be more legible

i cant see much and its hard to read.

Ya, its Dayum ugly. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM IS HAEVILY & STRONGLY APPRECIATED It isn't original size, I had to reduce the size because it was a tad big, now I will use a sharper pencil and draw a tad smaller so that the text can be seen clearly and it isn't much blur. Im drawing the part 2 now.