The work that went into this is great.

Great job, I liked it. But yeah, you could clean up the text a little bit!

too much text but nice editing, nice for a first try.

OxiMagician said: " OMG! You beat me to it! I loved Zatrox's comics :D." yeah..wonder what happend to him

Nice job =]

i hate the winking face.

Ivan12 said: "Wooo, Zatrox is in it :D" OMG! You beat me to it! I loved Zatrox's comics :D.

sort of confusing

Nice editing, I don't really like the plot.

Wall of Text isn't bad because people are too lazy to read it. Wall of Text is bad because this is a comic, not a novel.

Centenial said: "Your comic will barely improve without negative criticism, also known as flames. As you choose to ignore it, you will just continue to create bad comics. My criticism: 1] Wall of Text is ok with me. 2] Confusing, stick to one topic, try to be clear and not change from one thing to another. 3] Must construct additional storyline." Fixed, wall of text aren't bad unless you didn't go to first grade, Btw I understood the comic, just had to read it a second time and tune out the rand

Nice editing :]

wth the story is all messed up i dont like it 1/10 editing is good but u must be 10 years old... seriously its not even about the title

Editing is decent but I don't get what the heck is going on.

Wooo, Zatrox is in it :D