It's okay. Yeah, the concept is good, but editing sucks.

The overall theme is awesome but the editing and grammar sux :o

I know what the skill pickpocket does, but this made no sense and is a horrible comic.

cardcaptort said: "i dont get it what happened?" Its kinda not that hard to understand if you understand how "pickpocket" works.

Echounit71 said: " 1. Spelling + grammar fail ; Thank you I know there were a few mistakes. 2. Very unexplained plot ; You would have to be 4 to not understand the plot I'm sorry. 3. Not funny ; Thank you for stating your opinion. 4. Jokes are overused ; Also this is you opinion." About the plot thing, I think he means that it isn't very confusing and stuff. And your grammar was pretty bad. Not only a few mistakes.... o.o more like every panel.. o.o I'm just trying to help!

FunkethElf said: "What did they pickpocket?" DUUHH they didn't pick-pocket, they hustled 'em.

i dont get it what happened?

What did they pickpocket?

i like it : p

Advice: -If you don't have backgrounds you should use speech bubbles.

Pobelt said: "1. Spelling + grammar fail 2. Very unexplained plot 3. Not funny 4. Jokes are overused" 1. Spelling + grammar fail ; Thank you I know there were a few mistakes. 2. Very unexplained plot ; You would have to be 4 to not understand the plot I'm sorry. 3. Not funny ; Thank you for stating your opinion. 4. Jokes are overused ; Also this is you opinion.

actually... its pretty good =] I got it at least...

1. Spelling + grammar fail 2. Very unexplained plot 3. Not funny 4. Jokes are overused

nicke105 said: "You did your job wrong. My page is dirt poor. Oh wait..." I'm sorry we do not work for Poor pages ): Btw for people that don't get it um Sorry but its not hard to get xD.

this is a wack job.