Aw I thought the green sin was gonna mug lil jack

love tha last panel lmao

at least it not a total copy of fable cause in fable his parent was kill my bandit her sister worked for twinblade after u got capture also the other guy should be more like black

i can tell you right now that the humor in your speed of light plot will run short real soon really cliche storyline

awwww i really liked sucess story

i always wondered what the plot of fable was o.O

Thanks for the input, SilverFox and Vedris. i'll be sure to change that. PSA: If i accepted you to be in the comic, you won't be in for a few issues, if that is okay.

Blue background hurt my eyes kind of. Try to go for a lighter color. Also, there's no point in putting those faces in the chat bubbles if you can see the character's face.

Lol, "We want YOU"

I want to be the blind sister!, i mean brother! xD

u forgot the part where the village burns down O_O

Uh-oh He lost his sword =D

LOL i like it more please could i be in it? I could be whisper or something!

Oooh I wanna be in, let me die first :D

Heck, I'd like to be in the comic. Don't I look hero-ey? :D Otherwise, although it could use some work, it seems pretty good so far. Using a cliched plot, but making a complete mockery and satire of it could turn out really well, so I'd say this has a lot of potential. Maybe work on a better background (Not for the actual comic, but the space the panels sit in) and the font will make it look a lot better.