Simply terrible.

blaknight said: "So...did you just decide to redo it anyway? Horrible editing or not? Because if your editing has improved, i might have to gouge my eyes out if i look at the original." the first part of the original one was so bad your eyes would bleed and make you click the like button and run away

So...did you just decide to redo it anyway? Horrible editing or not? Because if your editing has improved, i might have to gouge my eyes out if i look at the original.

thats one hell of an easy 9th grade math class!

ChocoBunnies said: "lol uh dude this happens all the time? not very uncommon" did you not just read what i said about this being cliche below?

lol uh dude this happens all the time? not very uncommon

Centenial said: "1] Storyline is cliche'd. 2] Don't use narrations. It's a comic book, not a novel. 3] Don't use walls of text either. 4] Unoriginal: Shoop Da Whoop, Gentleman Dash (It's just plain annoying now.) 5] Not enough suspense. The same old obvious heartbreaking love story." yeah... it is the same, and to all who think i stole it, feel free to check out my screens, that idea was MINE so please stop commenting about how i stole it and that and this. how is it cliche or whatever you guys

1] Storyline is cliche'd. 2] Don't use narrations. It's a comic book, not a novel. 3] Don't use walls of text either. 4] Unoriginal: Shoop Da Whoop, Gentleman Dash (It's just plain annoying now.) 5] Not enough suspense. The same old obvious heartbreaking love story.

Horrible. comparable (but not AS bad) to georgias makeover. Editing sucks. Story cliche fail.

this copied another comic

christobhal2 said: "Is it truly better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all, if while loving you may have been happy but afterwards you just feel worse than you did before. Just my 2 cents on that quote." well actually sir, the quote from the man is correct, even after the heartbreak, you do get over it, and then you remember the good times you had with the love so its all ok. and are you continuing this, i don't think its over

Is it truly better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all, if while loving you may have been happy but afterwards you just feel worse than you did before. Just my 2 cents on that quote.

Yo, this is the exact replica of my love story or something.

Usagii said: "Love problems are very common so even if you thought of this yourself it's not orginial at all." common in what way? do you see love stories around? how often? yeah... im still waiting for an answer, and thanks guys for supporting me

LOL that was really good