eh a big wall of text, necks time try to spred it around, plus some fan service would be nice to

ArrowKawaii said: " That's Ansem" I'm pretty sure it was Anselm. Nobody ;].

Anselm=Ansem? White wizard -_- I think that if this really happened the wizard wouldn't have said what he said in the 5th panel o.o normally he woulda said like how dare u betray me? if u wanna explain but a prologue or say how dare u betray me apprentice!

rajiworthy said: "feels a lot like a book i read... Magyk by Angie Sage..." lolz i read that book 1 year ago. Well i got the wizard tower from runescape lolz (used to play it a long time ago)

Anselm sound so much like Ansem. White wizard? Kinda taken by gandalf. Other than the non-creativity of names it looks cool.

trains said: "I like how you basically try to summarize the whole plot in that one screen in the middle :P" I noticed that too :D That one of the lamest dialogues Ive seen But great editing

kimawashi said: "anselm... isnt that from kingdom hearts? lol just wondering make another one please :D" That's Ansem

FlameOfDark said: "White wizard, uncreative." ��i like pie��

I like how you basically try to summarize the whole plot in that one screen in the middle :P

Did he give you permission to use his name? o.o Not that you really NEED it, but I'm just saying...

shouldnt it be grey wizard? cos i dont anything thats pure white( except maybe his shoes)

The woman says and too much.

You should have done an "introduction" of some sort. Im finding it hard to follow the storyline.

feels a lot like a book i read... Magyk by Angie Sage...

anselm... isnt that from kingdom hearts? lol just wondering make another one please :D