NICE JOb!

yeah huskys RULE !

i likes it

Good start.

Needs.. more background, I think. It looks a bit plain.

keep going on this man its not a bad comic jsut needs more suspense lmao jk

SilverFoxR said: "Not a bad start... One suggestion, if I may. In the panel where Mushmom launches your characters into the air... you should use another pose... preferably the jumping one or the swimming one... to show you're not standing in mid-air. So far, you're doing a great job, though." I liked how they flew up in the air like that though. Seems funnier then a pose.

Lol at the last panel.

FinalBragade said: "inb4failstory" old meme is old.

Talking dogs FTW!

DeathPsycho said: "Level 10 and whored up on NX already? Great comic :D" I think it's supposed to be like inside the game... If that makes sense. Like the anime. x.x Why not let them look good? XD

inb4failstory

SilverFoxR said: "Not a bad start... One suggestion, if I may. In the panel where Mushmom launches your characters into the air... you should use another pose... preferably the jumping one or the swimming one... to show you're not standing in mid-air. So far, you're doing a great job, though." I think it looks better that way, because the didn't jump, the muchmom knocked them into the air. Since it came by surprise, they wouldn't have had time to change their positions. The husky's position shou

Not a bad start... One suggestion, if I may. In the panel where Mushmom launches your characters into the air... you should use another pose... preferably the jumping one or the swimming one... to show you're not standing in mid-air. So far, you're doing a great job, though.

MAKE MORE! ITS TO KAWAII! x3