Screen #116738

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SilverFoxR

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Comments (15)

wotsitman 07/14/08

CheezIts said: " Basil ID > Screens." Thanks!

HolyArcherX 07/13/08

IcyCold said: "The plot doesnt seem to be getting anywhere, but at least you make your comics quickly (unlike a certain maple legends creator...), so im sure the plot will unfold. Good comic :D" Im going with icycold with this one. Its about 5-6 comics about fighting slimes now. Doesn't seem to be going anywhere.

Bloodynite 07/13/08

the title Freelancers makes me think of RVB hehe ^^

xcluster 07/13/08

Didnt like the plot, but the overall presentation is not bad

pointydevil 07/13/08

its pretty cool. the action word text and the text balloons are pretty cool too

xiadowstarz 07/12/08

The slimes cute =}

Kyensho 07/12/08

Ryan's face looks quite the same as usual. In the last panel where it seems he's about to explode due to anger, his face stays still. I believe the F1 or Flaming face would be of good use there.

idkdude 07/12/08

Etokapa said: " I know right! That other series takes so long! It's not like we readers actually care about all the time that's put into it anyways." I'm sure Etokapa is trying his best to make more comics, but I bet he is busy or something <_<. Ya. Fighting slimes for like 5 comics in a row... I got bored after the second one, and now I dislike it.

magicguy8989 07/12/08

this comic is pretty stupid... nothing interesting

joyjason 07/12/08

One suggestion, on the last panel, make Ryan look more mad than usual other than that, it's awesome... keep 'em coming!

Etokapa 07/12/08

IcyCold said: "The plot doesnt seem to be getting anywhere, but at least you make your comics quickly (unlike a certain maple legends creator...), so im sure the plot will unfold. Good comic :D" I know right! That other series takes so long! It's not like we readers actually care about all the time that's put into it anyways.

CheezIts 07/12/08

wotsitman said: "This comic looks cool. SilverfoxR, do you know where I can read your whole series up till now? Please! Thanks in advance." Basil ID > Screens.

wotsitman 07/12/08

This comic looks cool. SilverfoxR, do you know where I can read your whole series up till now? Please! Thanks in advance.

iLiketoSecks 07/12/08

There's haters everywhere, they're just tryna mess with you. These comics are great, keep em coming! :D

IcyCold 07/12/08

The plot doesnt seem to be getting anywhere, but at least you make your comics quickly (unlike a certain maple legends creator...), so im sure the plot will unfold. Good comic :D